The Sins of the Fathers Chapter Twelve

    The next chapter is up at Phoenix Song for those interested. In an effort to bring the whole thing to a end, I've skipped one of the chapters I'd originally planned. TBH it was a bit dull as it was all reflection by the characters, but only time will tell if the narrative falls over because of its absence.

    http://www.phoenixsong.net/fanfiction/review.php?sid=1443&cid=6444

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    rachel's picture

    Liked your chapter so much!

    Liked your chapter so much! I couldn't comment as I have not even looked at Phoenix Song for so long, I forgot my username and password. Which is a sad statement as far as reading any HP fan fiction. Anyway, wanted to say I really enjoyed this. Glad that Dumbledore has at least some sense in keeping an eye on Madam and Snape. So all is not lost. Hope he gets some licks in this story. Everyone else walks around in an oblivious haze to anything around them including Harry.

    parakletos's picture

    rachel wrote: Liked your

    rachel wrote:

    Liked your chapter so much! I couldn't comment as I have not even looked at Phoenix Song for so long, I forgot my username and password. Which is a sad statement as far as reading any HP fan fiction. Anyway, wanted to say I really enjoyed this. Glad that Dumbledore has at least some sense in keeping an eye on Madam and Snape. So all is not lost. Hope he gets some licks in this story. Everyone else walks around in an oblivious haze to anything around them including Harry.

    The problem with the POV that is shown is that there is far too much going on to be shown in this story and so you only get to see the topmost layer.

    Thanks for taking time to review.